Essay topics:
People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons
(for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.).
Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Students join college for various purposes such as enhancing experience, Career prospects ,Gaining knowledge etc.However there are few people who attend college for other reasons , In my perspective people attend college for better Career prospects. I shall explain it in detail in this essay.
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...lishment is to spread / offer knowledge.One of the main reason that Many students a...
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...he studies that can fetch promising jobs ,For instance In the current scenario, IT...
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...ies for computer or software programmers .As per the survey done by the university...
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...doing higher studies in computer science . Let me explain the Second reason ,Pe...
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...ce . Let me explain the Second reason ,People who has passion of their interest...
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...ance, My wife is fond of medical science ,to full fill her wish she did her master...
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...ople go to college such as social status , Family pressure and some for fun. Howev...
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...r university for better career prospects , As, for survival a person needs job whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2024291498 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7273743415 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.84320803 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.625 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424595244685 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171755642626 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129197528034 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273564511648 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983265348505 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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