I am writing regarding a training course which I am interested in participating and respectfully asking for some help. The course” Recent Innovations in Environmental Noise Monitoring” as I found on Danish Environmental Conservation Company website is going to be held in September 2018 in Denmark by Breul & Kajear Company.
Working as noise and vibration expert in this company for nearly two decades providing services for all corners of the world, I believe that the course content is quite relevant and more importantly vital for my job to get familiar with the latest techniques and it would definitely be beneficial for our company’s future.
Accordingly I firstly require your support with an introduction letter to Bruel & Kajear Co. to enroll me in. Secondly I need a letter to Danish Embassy to confirm me as the company’s staff in order that I can apply for visa.
I appreciate your kind attention to this matter.
Yours Faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...cial for our company's future. Accordingly I firstly require your support with an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30322580645 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31249385236 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690322580645 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.0533200812 44.8134815571 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.0 76.5299724578 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306340157574 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127124258189 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419012432579 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147717645064 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415780262775 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 8.62886597938 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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