Dear Mr. Sanjit
I am writing this letter in regard to the training course.
I have come across the advertisement for a training course in Deccan Hearld today, The institution named jspiders is conducting a course on web development. The course duration is 3 months.
If I enroll in this course it will very helpful for me in developing interactive and user friendly websites for our upcoming projects. So I request you to kindly do the needful.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Shruti Ashok
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 26.3917525773 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 447.0 937.175257732 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 88.0 206.0 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.06281431361 3.78020617076 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86217044009 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 127.690721649 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 129.6 290.88556701 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6348325665 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8571428571 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5714285714 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341111110345 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11836491533 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377768010728 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149787337391 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503963004902 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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