You work for an in the international company. you have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
. Describe the training course you want to do.
.explainwhat the company could do to help you.
. say how the course will be useful for your job.
Dear Mike,
How have you been?. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to tell you that I am planning an adventurous trip to Samoa island and would like you to join me.
Lately, I have not been able to keep up a healthy work-life balance due to hectic work schedule. To elucidate I had been involved in some alluring projects which gave me sleepless nights. I know you love travelling and perhaps if I have your company on this trip then I wouldn’t get bored. Additionally, I believe this is an ideal opportunity to get away from your monotonous schedule and explore one of the famous travel destinations.
I am planning for a short trip to Samoa, it is one of the secluded islands in the Pacific ocean which attracts tourist globally. From the mesmerising white sand beaches, you can see the panoramic view of the vast blue ocean. Additionally, we can explore nearby islands and try adventure sports like sky-diving, snorkelling and kayaking. I plan to travel next week on Thursday.
As I need to plan an itinerary so I shall await your response.
Warm wishes
Brian
- You due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to resume because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer in your- Explain your situation- Describe your situation-Tell him/her will you think you can start. 73
- A motorway is ro be built near your house.as you think that will destroy areas of natural beauty.Write a letter to the local authorities. In your letter:•express your views•explain what damage will be caused•suggesst alternative routes 67
- Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.Write a letter to your friend. In your letterSay why a driving license is advantageousrecommend a driving schoolgive any extra guidance/tips 78
- Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- It's better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.What extent do you agree or disagree. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, How have you been?. It has been a long t...
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Line 8, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inerary so I shall await your response. Warm wishes Brian
^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hall await your response. Warm wishes Brian
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66497461929 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75059463141 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.041473927 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6923076923 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216329999797 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645026356683 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572409867031 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127282441629 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391807035604 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.