You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Mike,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing in reference to inform you that I have recently moved to a new house. Now the hassles of a long drive to and from office and the resultant fatigue have come to an end as the new apartment is located in close vicinity to my office thus I can spend more time on reading and outdoor sports activities.
To elucidate the new house is a spacious three-bedroom apartment located in the suburbs of the city additionally it offers all modern amenities like a gymnasium, swimming pool, 24 hours security and free parking. Due to its superb location, the residents can also enjoy the panoramic view of the mesmerizing hills.
Why don’t you pay us a visit this weekend? I am also inviting my college friends for a house warming party. It will be a great opportunity to meet our old friends and have some fun.
I look forward to your response.
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I look forward to your response. Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55357142857 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62282600831 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5534223364 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321406079311 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118659517406 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106556105242 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15382457247 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107971717632 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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