You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
1. describe the training course you want to do
2. explain what the company could do to help you
3. say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Mr Jon Smith,
I am writing this quick letter to describe my interest in one of the online course I have seen on the internet and I am keen to do that.
The online course is the certification about professional communication in the corporate world for the duration of a year offered by Stanford University. As it is the online course, I don't need to take off work. It can be completed with the dedication of five to six hours a week which wouldn't be a hindrance to my daily work.
The company can also help me to prioritize my profile during selection by sponsoring me for the course. I would like to make a small request about taking a week off during exam time if it's not affecting my routine.
As this course is about communication skills, it will be proven helpful whenever I go outside to represent the company and for the presentation. With the help of this certification, I will be able to conduct small sessions regarding communication skills inside the company for employees.
I would love to complete this certification and I assure you that it will not degrade my work at all. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Let me know in case of any further information.
Yours Sincerely,
Jaimin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...iversity. As it is the online course, I dont need to take off work. It can be comple...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ation of five to six hours a week which wouldnt be a hindrance to my daily work. The ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r information. Yours Sincerely, Jaimin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60550458716 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88819302528 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582568807339 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8076134404 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266773412078 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859509769656 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630634234002 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132151156399 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605569715854 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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