You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Dear Mr. Jahson,
I am writing with regards to an advertisement that I noticed on the website of a reputed institute which offer educational courses about material science. I was wondering if is it possible to provide me some financial support to take that course.
It would be noteworthy to say that this course is about the latest methods for material characterization and including 5 days of vocational education by working with modern equipment such as Scanning Electron Microscopy.
Although I am really keen on attending this course, due to my financial situation, I am not able to afford the tuition. I really appreciate it if you could support me or provide me some loans.
As your company is working on some international project with collaboration with foreign companies, this a great opportunity to improve and extend the company share by offering new services. I am sure that this brings a new set of positive consequences and make a huge benefit for company.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Yalda Asgari.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17679558011 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08151616712 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0362397397 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24049027555 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089896431688 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795520936986 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125507459051 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797621221539 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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