You work a part time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full time position Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position In your letter say Why do you want to apply What are your futur

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter with regards to apply for a full-time position in our company which I saw in the advertisement on our website. I request you to give me an opportunity to apply for this position as I am working on a part-time basis for a long period of time.

This full-time opportunity could fetch my career growth and be an expert in new skills. I am confident enough to reach the Managing Director position in our company in a couple of years and also very optimistic to accomplish the given targets in a robust way.

I have a vivid range of knowledge to expand our company growth by engaging with international clients and bringing a large number of projects. So, I request you once again consider my letter and I hope you move this further.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
John Brown

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...working on a part-time basis for a long period of time. This full-time opportunity could f...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a robust way" with adverb for "robust"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...imistic to accomplish the given targets in a robust way. I have a vivid range of knowledge ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...with international clients and bringing a large number of projects. So, I request you once again ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61589403974 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71080239586 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8591766879 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388008279944 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142828858217 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10373440468 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181397905839 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138622444553 0.0580467560999 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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