Nowadays, many people are effected by smoking cigarettes and chewing tobacco which causes lung and throat cancer as well as cardiac arrest. In fact, there is no evidence of any age group or gender who does not smoke these days, among them consuming of cigarette smoking is high in young group. Government has came up with an idea by issuing certain laws within the age group in many countries selling or smoking cigarettes below 18 is punishable offense. However, most of them are still selling or smoking under the age 18 illegally.
Although, almost all tobacco production organizations around the world are following government policies by labeling the waring signs on every product they sell in the market for awareness of public before consuming the tobacco which causes cancer and leads to death. Despite, being aware of warning signs on tobacco products still people are buying and most likely at the age group from 40 to 60 or above are heavy cigarettes smokers and being affected with serious illness.
The economy in many countries has been increasing in high rate of tobacco smokers each year, even though tobacco production units price up in cigarette rates which is more profitable to the government to ban cigarettes and some local dealers making illegal tobacco which is highly dangerous and has no awareness of public health.
In the matter of public health concern, government should take serious step towards banning the cigarettes all over the world in spite of profiting over the tobacco government could come up with alternative of cigarettes such as nicotine patches, gums or tablets by encourage private or public organizations to produce for public safety.
- Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read You should include Describe the book How it can help him her Where can he get it from 73
- Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today In the interest of the public health governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products Do you agree or disagree 61
- People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives but few people achieve it What are the causes of the problems How to overcome it 73
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 61
- You and your friend are planning a picnic in the countryside Write Which arrangements have you already done Other activities that can be done How can your friend help with the arrangements 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... is high in young group. Government has came up with an idea by issuing certain laws...
^^^^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and has no awareness of public health. In the matter of public health concern, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, still, well, in fact, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1231884058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54399433222 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8560612593 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.75 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297794754739 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124081750008 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676603208922 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18358482621 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417933910726 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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