Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the availability of few household electronic goods. I recently shifted to a new house, which is a couple of blocks away from your shop. I hope I can find whatever I need in your shop.
I would like to buy a two-room heater, one water heater and a smart TV. Bedrooms in my apartment rooms are pretty small, so I am hoping to hear a few recommendations from your end on the size of the room heater. In terms of the water heater, I need the one with sophisticated technology and should store the hot water for a longer period of time. I am looking of the one, which has the capacity of at least 25 – 30 litres of waters. For a TV, it should have a chrome-casting option and I wish to purchase 48 or 48 inches television.
Could you please send me the estimated quotation or sales chart for the above-mentioned products. I have another request, currently, I am out of the town. Could you please confirm how much longer you can hold the products for me? Also, could you please confirm whether home delivery is available or not. As I living only two blocks away, I believe it should not be a problem.
Yours sincerely,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...can find whatever I need in your shop. I would like to buy a two-room heater, on...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...should store the hot water for a longer period of time. I am looking of the one, which has the...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...r home delivery is available or not. As I living only two blocks away, I believe ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42533936652 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.763346601 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0011843773 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8571428571 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102837564135 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352078618408 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317232713033 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491319614094 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469614407617 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.