You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir
I am the native dweller of Talwandi , which is near to the Moga. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to enquire from you about the some electrical goods are available all your shop, which I want to buy.
As I want Samsung single door refrigerator, 36 inch Samsung LED and a microwave of same company. Indeed, its my little brother's wedding on next month, therefore, I want to give these electric goods to him as a wedding gift from my side. Moreover I would also like to know that if you have these things in your shop or whether you will order for them.
I would be very applicable if you send me the price details of all these equipments, so that I can able to arrange the adequate money on the time. Furthermore, I would like to know, how long you will able to hold this goods for me because in this week, I am not free. Actually, I have an urgent business meeting in Australia, due to this, I have to go there to attend the meeting. Perhaps, I will be able to buy these things on next week.
I would be very grateful, if you send me all the details about my requirements as early as possible. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely 26th February 2018
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r I am the native dweller of Talwandi , which is near to the Moga. The purpose ...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oga. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to enquire from you abou...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...pistle is to enquire from you about the some electrical goods are available all your...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd a microwave of same company. Indeed, its my little brothers wedding on next mont...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... to him as a wedding gift from my side. Moreover I would also like to know that if you h...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to know, how long you will able to hold this goods for me because in this week, I am...
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Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you. Your sincerely 26th February 2018 Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31441048035 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38799771384 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580786026201 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2616839408 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337569779105 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112705869168 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978462409307 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149689701049 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952338709512 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.