You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods

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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.

Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear Shopkeeper,

I am looking a few items from your shop to decorate my house and living room, I am writing in regard to check if you have those products available in your shop.

I wanted to buy a standing lamp, some CFL’s for my chandelier, colorful led lights for outside and inside lighting.

Is it possible if you can order these products for me if all are not available?

Can you please give me the quotation for all the goods individually priced?

I would like a favor from you, can you hold the listed item for a week as I am out-of-town and I am able to pick the order before a week. For how long you can keep these items on hold for me, I am ready for making payment in advance. As once I am back, I will be in need of those items immediately. It would be great if you can keep that order and I will try to collect asap once I am back.

Thanks in advance

Regards

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p once I am back. Thanks in advance Regards
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30057803468 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38821378944 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6958416377 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210916036968 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091522021113 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501449465073 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103380854608 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502227329938 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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