Dear Sir,
My name is Ashish and I am working as Senior Consultant in an Intellectual property firm located in Delhi. Recently, I have come across to know about your annual seminar on' European Union Patent laws and trends in Trade Union' conducted by your organisation in Copenhegen. Hence, I am writing this letter to request you some information about session and seek permission to participate. As subject matter is closely related to my current working profile, taking part in the event would be greatly helpful to my career.
Therefore, kindly let me know the details of program, for instance, like venue, particulars of dates and number of days, accommodation facilities for participants. Further, please provide me an estimation about total costs for whole seminar inclusion of entry fee and visa expenses. Presently, my company will be affording all the conveyances and charges to attend the program. However, for that, I need to submit bills for reimbursement.
Certainly, I am also interested to know about lectures and workshops if any, planned as part of the conference. Nevertheless, I already booked my flights and planning to travel, with prior approval from your institution. Hope you can send my confirmation letter as soon as possible, so that I can attach along with my application for visa.
Thanks in advance for your kind co-operation and your swift response will be highly solicited.
Yours Faithfully,
Ashish.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, I have come across to know about your annual seminar on European Union Patent ...
^^
Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the event would be greatly helpful to my career. Therefore, kindly let me k...
^^
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...part of the conference. Nevertheless, I already booked my flights and planning ...
^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he conference. Nevertheless, I already booked my flights and planning to travel...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25862068966 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99310543461 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3782602989 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8461538462 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208318265323 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611162986645 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524806782591 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10587736611 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784307682608 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.