You would like to participate in work related seminar in another country Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program accommodation and cost

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing a letter to request information about the AI robotic conference in your country. I am a robotic engineer who interested robotic machine learning. I would appreciate it if you could forward me some information regarding the seminar.

First of all, when will the conference be held, as well as the detail of opening time and the deadline to submit document to the organiser. Secondly, could you provide me more detail about the robotic conference, for an instance, entrance fee, theme, development topic. It will be more helpful if you can provide me the program run down.

In addition, would it be possible suggest any accommodation nearby the venue? If so, please notify me about the budget that I need to prepare. I would be highly obliged if you could provide this detail at your earliest.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ho interested robotic machine learning. I would appreciate it if you could forwar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73595556595 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9693070387 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3636363636 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 4.34317383033 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178397856225 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647351242964 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065648952076 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100455211349 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471212430632 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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