You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am Prabhpreet Kaur, senior manager customer service in Hamilton company. I am writing this letter to enquire about the seminar on customer service and marketing in Sydney, Australia, in December 2018 through an advertisement in newspaper. I am planning to attend this seminar and need some further information.
Firstly, the duration of the seminar was not mentioned in the advertisement, I would like to know the exact duration of seminar along with the dates. Secondly, please notify the topics and speakers of the program and will there be any hands-on or just theoretical sessions. And finally, as I will be travelling from India I would also like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be arranged by you? If not, could you please let me know about the hotels nearby with the profitable cost per night including meals. What would be the approximate cost to attend and successfully finish the seminar?
I am very much interested in attending the seminar as this will help in the growth in my position and your reply would help me plan for it in advance. So, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding my concerns.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... through an advertisement in newspaper. I am planning to attend this seminar and ...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98536585366 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84149586499 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3894238082 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224186540838 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824858937354 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565414631278 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134079359926 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574384492112 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.