You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing ask for some informations about seminar which advertisement I recently heard in broadcast. I would be interested in receiving more detail informations regarding this event.
I would be grateful if you could send me broshure with proper lacation for this seminar and time schedule. Base on advertisement, I am aware only that this sesion will be in Sydney on the last week of April. Could you please send me as well agenda for this meeting with information about speakers and subjects which their will present.
In addition, I would like to receive information regarding the accommodation for participants during the seminar. Will you organise rooms and meals for attendances? If yes, please send me your price list. If not, I would be grateful if you forward to me information with contact details to nearest hotels.
I look forward to receiving your comments.
Yours faithfully
Ana Samuel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...informations regarding this event. I would be grateful if you could send me ...
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Line 13, column 288, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the nearest'.
Suggestion: to the nearest
... to me information with contact details to nearest hotels. I look forward to receivin...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21568627451 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93502624945 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0388214451 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5454545455 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266324959046 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104423182862 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11085081971 0.0603063233224 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164407108194 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116660827616 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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