You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation, and cost.
Dear sir/Mam,
There is an IEEE seminar is conducting from your University in the month of January 2018. I heard from my supervisor that it would be good for my career growth. Could you please give me some of the detailed clarifications below?
1. What is the date, duration, and timing of the seminar?
2. Topics to be discussed in the seminar?
3. what are the fees for the seminar?
In Addition, I need some more help from your side. As I am not the resident of this country so I won't have any arrangements for accommodation. Could you please tell me if you have the arrangements for accommodation and the charges for the same, if no, then please help me to find affordable accommodation.
Thanks in advance.
Sincerely,
pallavi Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...career growth. Could you please give me some of the detailed clarifications below? 1. Wh...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...s to be discussed in the seminar? 3. what are the fees for the seminar? In Add...
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Line 11, column 265, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...harges for the same, if no, then please help me to find affordable accommodation. Thanks in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 637.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86259541985 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91317153319 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 127.690721649 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9555538191 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.9090909091 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9090909091 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201421166665 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711859947507 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055740659501 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126476780626 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297197820294 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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