You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter
Explain what type of car you would like
Give details of when you would like the car
Request more information about the cost
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I would like to rent can in first of Octobar as this is the date of my holiday. I would much prefer to get sport car which is quiter and has better performance in order to be more comfortable for me and my wife.
The vacation starts at 10th of October so picking up the car befor one week of that will be extremly appreciated. it may seem early from my holiday date; However, it is better to get it early to get used to driving it. also I can get my final arrangement faster by using that car. would you please send me confirmation about the specific date and location where i can recieve the keys and also where to deliver after vacation.
Kindly send me also all information related to fee of the ride. is the cost cover the insurance and petrol? I know that it is illegal to drive a car without insurance as stated by law.
Thank you for your consideration.
yours faithfully,
Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I woul...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...k of that will be extremly appreciated. it may seem early from my holiday date; Ho...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...l arrangement faster by using that car. would you please send me confirmation about t...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut the specific date and location where i can recieve the keys and also where to ...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...information related to fee of the ride. is the cost cover the insurance and petrol...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... Thank you for your consideration. yours faithfully, Ahmed
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your consideration. yours faithfully, Ahmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31111111111 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45424172997 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9531076329 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5454545455 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29582839344 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978349493405 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713534504594 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183248043865 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843420543692 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.