Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to render an information about to the car, which I would rent for a vacation.
I am going to give you an detail about car. I would like to rent a car, which is comfortable for the five people and give a good enough space while sitting in this car at the back seat because our trip is around 800 km.
I would like to get a car within five day if possible because I will plan to go on next week, so if I will get this car before my journey, so I used to it little bit and I want to rent this car for one week.
I am not especially looking for a cheaper plan, but I need a car with the good comfort for family. Aforementioned, I can say that the cost of car should be between $1000 and $1500 dollar if you have one. Thank you.
I look forward to hearing from you as early as possible.
Your faithfully,
Archie.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, I am writing to render an information ab...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... a vacation. I am going to give you an detail about car. I would like to rent ...
^^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... going to give you an detail about car. I would like to rent a car, which is comf...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... because our trip is around 800 km. I would like to get a car within five day...
^
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... car before my journey, so I used to it little bit and I want to rent this car for one wee...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...want to rent this car for one week. I am not especially looking for a cheaper...
^
Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...st of car should be between 000 and 500 dollar if you have one. Thank you. I look ...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... early as possible. Your faithfully, Archie.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02352941176 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31764705882 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.640065276 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431793624737 0.216113520407 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171343411815 0.0766984524023 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730482169462 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230741505189 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845033585406 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 70.7449484536 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.04 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.07 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.