Dear officer,
I am writing this letter in response to your advert in the newspaper for a job opening in Canada for various positions.
In brief, I graduated from Gujarat Technological
University, Ahmedabad in 2015. After graduation, I started working as an ios Application developer. Currently, in total, I am having 6+ years of experience in the same technology. So, I believe that I am the right candidate for the mobile application developer. Therefore, I have attached my resume for your reference.
Even though I have worked with both startups and big MNC, I am very much interested in the large-cap industry. The reason behind this is that they are financially strong to give salary on time. So, that I can settle in a new place very easily.
The reason behind to work in Canada is that can the government provide different kinds of the facility is free of costs such as health care and education sector for PR holder and their citizen and in the future, So I can be one of them.
I await a favorable response.
Yours faithfully,
Anand Mehra.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...logical University, Ahmedabad in 2015. After graduation I started working as an ios ...
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Line 6, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ve attached my resume for your reference . Even though I have worked with both ...
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Line 8, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...inancial strong to give salary on time. So, that I can settle in new place very easily. ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, in brief, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90229885057 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77716637262 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9712926111 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0833333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891319388755 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265938181013 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348963695589 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398438106074 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040451061182 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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