Essay topics:
Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
• Say why you would like to go
• Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
• Ask some more questions about the trip
...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are hardly
...heir wards. Due to a fast paced life we hardly are able to slice time for Aashir in order ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rm of his classmates and teachers. In order to assist with our backgrounds,...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed by school to plan this trip to. In case required I could assist in prepa...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lan of what all would be required: How many students alongwith parents are ...
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Line 41, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tra in case struck by bad weather? Looking forward to hearing from you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81140350877 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49990381471 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600877192982 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2301107082 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.7 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169524772154 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704626894458 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422913554859 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756428776323 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379133039494 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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