Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
Say why you would like to go on the trip
Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Mr. Patel,
I am extremely glad to inform you that, I would love to join School's Singapore tour with students group which is going to organise by next October.
Singapore is exquisite destination as I have been lived there for 2 years for my corporate project. I have worked as professional tour guide as part time job when I was in Singapore. I want to rejuvenate myself after ages with this place.
As i Said, I have international expose so, I can easily guide our pupils group and I will helpful to explore different places. I will keep in touch with travel agencies as well as with school principal Mr. Nair.
However, I want to know that Which hotels are you going to books for students, Because I have many connection with hotel managers and we can get more discount on mass booking. Outside of India food is critical problem, so any cook will coming with us or not? Please let me know if I could help in this case.
I look forward to hear from you soon with positive response.
Yours Sincerely,
Ronak Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Patel, I am extremely glad to inform you that, ...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Singapore) must be used with a third-person verb: 'tours'.
Suggestion: tours
... I would love to join Schools Singapore tour with students group which is going to o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ve worked as professional tour guide as part time job when I was in Singapore. I want to ...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...self after ages with this place. As i Said, I have international expose so, I...
^
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun connection seems to be countable; consider using: 'many connections'.
Suggestion: many connections
...g to books for students, Because I have many connection with hotel managers and we can get more...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 237, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...d is critical problem, so any cook will coming with us or not? Please let me know if I...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...d help in this case. I look forward to hear from you soon with positive response. ...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h positive response. Yours Sincerely, Ronak Patel
^^^
Line 14, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse. Yours Sincerely, Ronak Patel
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60752688172 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48215390076 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693548387097 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.878163808 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157695716634 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513219109208 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521502186331 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837886344245 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576687214477 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.