I am writing to express my interest to be part of the children’s trip to another city, the Mount Tabour. I have been to the city many times before and can advise about the best places there to visit. I hope that you will accept my request and allow me to be part of the trip.
I would like to go with the children on their school trip to Mt: Tabour, firstly, because I know it very well. Also, it will be wonderful experience to travel with enthusiastic and energetic young minds.
My knowledge about the city would be extremely helpful during the trip. I could be a tourist guide, and show all the best tourist sports like the great museum, the Heritage House and palaces in the city. If any of your children wants to try skating I can help them because I am an expert in it.
I would like to know few details about the other arrangements for the trip like accommodation and travel. Have you informed the children that they should carry cloths which can protect them from freezing? As per the weather forecast some parts of the city is going to be extremely cold in coming week. There is still time, the information can be send now.
I look forward to be part of the wonderful trip.
Sincerely,
Eric Wilton
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e about the best places there to visit. I hope that you will accept my request an...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and allow me to be part of the trip. I would like to go with the children on t...
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Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s which can protect them from freezing? As per the weather forecast some parts of ...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to being'.
Suggestion: to being
...tion can be send now. I look forward to be part of the wonderful trip. Sincerel...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48444444444 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4077488077 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6369502733 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0714285714 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214846782519 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707442162695 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541596101037 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126131358847 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355660701494 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.