People spend too much on family celebrations such as birthdays and weddings.
What are importance of these celebrations?
Do you think people really spend too much?
Nowadays, celebrations have become a lavish affair. While celebrating birthdays and weddings are important part of culture and tradition it also strengthens the relations and adds joy and relaxation in everyone’s life. Unfortunately, these gatherings have become lavish parties.
In my opinion, celebrations are important for a verity of reasons. Firstly, family celebrations like weddings and birthdays are part of the culture and tradition of a society. In most cultures, these ceremonies are carried out in the presence of relatives and friends with various traditional functions. This is a wonderful opportunity to get together and have a quality time enjoying. Additionally, A part from the traditional gathering, for many these once in a while get-togethers are a way to relax and get away from otherwise busy and stressful routine. Although finding time might be difficult, it is truly rewarding. Lastly, when family joins together to celebrate a young ones or elderly persons birthday, or a special occasion it shows the love and care which will enhance the bond they share. More over the unforgettable memories they created will cherish throughout their life.
Nowadays, throwing parties have become an expensive affair. In other words, celebrations have become more of show biz as people try to find creative ways to make their celebrations stand out and this involves a lot of money. For instance, Indian business tycoon Ambani had spent millions of dollars and hosted his daughter’s wedding reception in Millan, Italy. This clearly shows that these celebrations have become a status symbol. Throwing lavish parties and over spending is not a part of any tradition or culture.
To conclude, even though, celebrations are part of the culture and it has various advantages in society, these are becoming more of an expensive affair which involves a large amount of money
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this once' or 'these onces'?
Suggestion: this once; these onces
...rom the traditional gathering, for many these once in a while get-togethers are a way to r...
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Line 5, column 681, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...ily joins together to celebrate a young ones or elderly persons birthday, or a speci...
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Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...er to celebrate a young ones or elderly persons birthday, or a special occasion it show...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, then, while, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40268456376 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0301121528 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9558620596 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7058823529 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165670380659 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555822438211 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470928754202 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10280897251 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220552584789 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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