Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you hale and healthy. I am writing to inform you that I am shifting to another residence at Jayanagar from annanagar by next week owing to my daughter’s school location. As you already know my daughter has joined in her kinder garden class last month and her school is little far from the home in which we are currently living. This new place has got many new exciting facilities those will precursor for her interest in extracurricular activities such as drawing, swimming, painting, and dancing. Therefore, we have decided to move to new accommodation.
Since you are moving to Chennai next month as well as this house will be vacant, you can move into my home. It is secured, serene, comfortable and above all, it is near to our office premises. It has a great shopping mall nearby that includes theatre, food court and gaming area in where we can spend our weekends leisurely. Additionally, it is just 5 minutes walkable from our office. Eventually, you don’t need to spend more time on traveling and you can avoid the traffic also. Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
ZARA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Hope this letter finds you hale and heal...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... decided to move to new accommodation. Since you are moving to Chennai next mon...
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Line 4, column 489, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...traveling and you can avoid the traffic also. Looking forward to your positive respo...
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Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive response. Yours sincerely, ZARA
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92346938776 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76834966934 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69387755102 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.377976095 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4166666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261128228931 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883023374679 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798978399079 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175083567027 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392538492517 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.