Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country.
In your letter, you should say:
-why you want to work there
-what skills and work experience you have
-inquire about details, such as salary, benefits, and hours
Dear Rohan,
I hope you are doing well by the grace of Almighty. Anyway, I am writing today to ask about employment opportunities in Canada for my profile.
I am a database engineer who has an experience of half-a-decade in the corporate sector with companies like Goggle, Microsoft, and Amazon. Sadly, after too much years of industry experience, I'm unable to live a better quality of lifestyle in a relaxed and stability manner because of higher costs of living and extra working hours. So, I thought to come to Canada for a better standards of living as I was searching on the internet about financial stability and relaxed lifestyle while working in Canada.
I have attached my resume to this letter and also send a soft copy to your email address. If you found any suitable opening in Canadian firms with my profile, please refer me only after giving your advise to get settled in Canada. Also, please do send some further details like average salary of my job according to work experience, working hours, and other company perks and benefits. Plus, do also include the monthly costs of living in order to be well prepared with my finances if I'll make any plans to get settled down in Canada.
I am hoping to hearing from you soon.
Warm Regards,
Shwatank Bhasin
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rohan, I hope you are doing well by the grace o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...Microsoft, and Amazon. Sadly, after too much years of industry experience, Im unable...
^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... too much years of industry experience, Im unable to live a better quality of life...
^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
... please refer me only after giving your advise to get settled in Canada. Also, please ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 486, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...to be well prepared with my finances if Ill make any plans to get settled down in C...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78828828829 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56057606664 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.092733587 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186323848972 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683674071143 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499417146367 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117991546739 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473780361061 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rohan, I hope you are doing well by the grace o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...Microsoft, and Amazon. Sadly, after too much years of industry experience, Im unable...
^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... too much years of industry experience, Im unable to live a better quality of life...
^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
... please refer me only after giving your advise to get settled in Canada. Also, please ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 486, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...to be well prepared with my finances if Ill make any plans to get settled down in C...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78828828829 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56057606664 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.092733587 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186323848972 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683674071143 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499417146367 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117991546739 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473780361061 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.