Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear David
How are you doing? Hope this letter finds you well. It has been long time since we saw each other. So I want to thank you for your plan to watch movie but unfortunately i cannot come to you due to my work schedule because my manager gave me lot of projects to complete and deadline of submission is up to next Friday only.
After your proposal, I phoned John immediately because he also asked me various time to hangout together, he can join you for your outing. When I him, he was so excited to go with you because he also want to join your company. You know the movie which releasing on Monday is of his favourite actor that's why you can both enjoy a lot.
Do you know? John is a candid personality, I bet he will entertain you the more with his company. Also, he is well-known about that city where you are planning to go. I will definitely join you for next time I extremely sorry about that. But I am sure that you will both enjoy a lot there.
Hope to hear from you soon
With love
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r plan to watch movie but unfortunately i cannot come to you due to my work sched...
^
Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... excited to go with you because he also want to join your company. You know the movi...
^^^^
Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ing on Monday is of his favourite actor thats why you can both enjoy a lot. Do y...
^^^^^
Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear from you soon With love Emily
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30612244898 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23464145871 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1159276973 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9230769231 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377494036777 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146356594324 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587665628851 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234032780886 0.12726935374 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628556291722 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.