Dear Tom,
I am writing to apologize that I can't accompany you for cinema as you planned for me, but my colleague Sophia would be at my place.
Actually, my uncle is coming from Spain and he didn't visit here before, so I must go to the airport to receive him. Moreover, I would take him to The foodie restaurant, where my aunt has fixed a family lunch that's why I have to stay with my family at restaurant.
Although, I concerned about your plan because there is no refund policy for tickets, then I offered to my colleague Sophia for the movie at my place and she agreed to go with you.
As I would be busy elsewhere, but she is the best person to go with you instead me because she has a keen interest in thriller movies but I haven't also has a funny nature so you won't be bored with her.
I hope you will have wonderful time
Yours truly
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Tom, I am writing to apologize that I cant accompany you for cinema as you pla...
^^
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...m, I am writing to apologize that I cant accompany you for cinema as you planned...
^^^^
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y, my uncle is coming from Spain and he didnt visit here before, so I must go to the ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the airport to receive him. Moreover, I would take him to The foodie restauran...
^^
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... where my aunt has fixed a family lunch thats why I have to stay with my family at re...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... keen interest in thriller movies but I havent also has a funny nature so you wont be ...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou will have wonderful time Yours truly Smith
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2303030303 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2756264337 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630303030303 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5394098229 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256849995602 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134533671923 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705071155467 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150045119267 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554973155546 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.