Your friend has asked you about the course details you recently took in a training center. In the letter, you should:
• Tell him about the course details
• Why your friend should take this course
• Explain how the course has benefited you.
Dear Jim,
I hope you’re doing well. I’ve received your message asking for the details of the English course I attended last month. Therefore, I’m writing this letter to give you the information about the course.
As I’ve already told you, the name of the center is Zim academy and it has two locations in district one and district three. You could sign up at either branch, however, the second office seems closer to your house.
About the course, you and I are on the same level so I highly recommend the intermediate class organized every two months. This course teaches four English skills including listening, reading, writing and speaking. The class only gathers three to five students at a time so that tutors can efficiently track your progress. Personally, I find this class fun and motivated to study resulting in a massive improvement in my English. More importantly, this course helped me reach my target in the last IELTS exam.
As for you, my friend. I believe this course will suit you well because not only the price is reasonable but also the schedule is quite flexible.
Again, just give me a call if you need any more details.
Your friend,
Truong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94581280788 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5308502024 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669950738916 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5017745773 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7142857143 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373609942203 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124163845447 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607835209929 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189800181327 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790605303011 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.