Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter:
1.Express your sympathy
2.Include memories you have about the dog
3. Invite your friend to do something with you
Dear Harry,
I’m so sorry for the loss of your dog ‘Tommy’. I am aware that you must be going through lots of pain and I hope this letter helps to ease your pain, as I am not available there to be with you in this tough time.
Yesterday, your sister called me and informed me about this sad news, I was flabbergasted. I wanted to be there with you but I am out of town so I couldn't make it to the funeral. I started feeling blue after knowing that Tommy is no longer with us. My deep condolences to you and your family.
I vividly remember last summer, when we went on a trip with your family and your dog. It was amazing as we had immense joy. I spend my entire time playing with Tommy.
I still remember when I lost my bag and he sniffed it out and helped me to find my bag. It’s hard for me to believe that I won’t be able to play with him anymore.
I’m coming back home this weekend, so we will meet at my apartment and will do some activities to cheer you up. I can understand, I can’t fill the void which has caused Tommy's death but you have to move on and I'll be there for you to help you out. May my condolences bring you comfort and his gentle soul will forever remain in our hearts. May he rest in peace!
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours truly,
Krishna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 131, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
... I wanted to be there with you but I am out of town so I couldnt make it to the funeral. I ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...here with you but I am out of town so I couldnt make it to the funeral. I started feeli...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 211, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ommys death but you have to move on and Ill be there for you to help you out. May m...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 32.9175257732 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16470588235 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19434104945 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0034720548 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.375 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277299881669 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974334106988 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891804606393 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133952221427 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832704906697 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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