Dear Steve,
I hope your day is going great. It has been a while since we last saw, but I have not forgotten all the good times we spent together.
I heard your dog died, and I am very sorry about that. It is not your fault that Bruno is dead because it is an unforseen circumstance. Accept my heart-felt sympathy.
As I am sitting in my balcony, I am reminiscing a lot of fun memories with Bruno, so I will say a few. To begin, do you remember when the dog attacked the man that tried to attack us beside Tetlo? I felt like I was being protected by a Super Hero. To continue, I cannot stop thinking about last Christmas when members of your family were at your place; Bruno was everyone's best friend! Lastly, I keep thinking about the day you brought Bruno to make love to Teddy, and I still remember all the drama that went down.
So, I am inviting you to come and play golf with me this weekend, and we are going to play chess. Also, members of my team at work are organising a party tonight, so I want us to attend together. Given that you are going through a lot right now, I suggest you accept my invitation.
All the best.
Adam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Steve, I hope your day is going great. It has b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22624434389 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.325290014 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606334841629 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4045403002 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8461538462 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259469490378 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759003168714 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756819460279 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148564872998 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623953494214 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.