Dear Diego
Hope you are doing great! I am so proud for you that your dream bakery shop will open this Sunday in Hanmilton. Unfortunately, I am the chairman of local squash club and we are held a master game on this Sunday so I am so sorry that I am unable to attend your grand opening.
I do remember how you crazy about to have a bakery shop so I am so glad the dream has come true. The joureny has started and I strong believe you would make huge profit as soon as you can because you are so intellgent and savvy of the bakery food.
As you know, I am leading a squash club in my community. The new master game will have start this Sunday, which I must attend it so it won’t disappoint our members. I promise I am to you shop next monday monrning. Hope I can help you to welcome the crowed customers.
Cannot wait to see you amazing shop.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...e. The joureny has started and I strong believe you would make huge profit as soon as y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19411764706 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28330028853 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7393967285 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222757504711 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934995620714 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563223102351 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143372919904 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300793032347 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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