Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include:
– Ask where to find a place to live
– Tell them what type of place you’re looking for
– Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there
Hi friends!
As you all know by now, I’ll soon be moving to Los Angeles with the rest of you. The problem is, I’m not sure yet where I should live or what to do after I get there. I would like to find a place that is relatively inexpensive, but also in a safe area. It would be great if it is just a one bedroom that is also close to a laundry facility. I don’t mind if it is a bit far from the university, but I would prefer it to be within walking distance to good restaurants and the beach, if possible. Can anyone help?
Have any of you learned how to surf yet? I’ve been watching tutorial videos and I think it would be really fun to try and learn. Please let me know if any of you can help me with my request, thank you.
Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...s and I think it would be really fun to try and learn. Please let me know if any of you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 623.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09868421053 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3689235578 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3738776934 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2222222222 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279411884464 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876673032743 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680721993777 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196802341624 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431999620121 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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