Dear Mike,
I'm so excited to let you know that I am moving to your city Sydney next month. Now it won't be too difficult for both of us to see each other too often.
Mike! as it's been 3 months for you to live in that metropolitan city and now I hope you must be aware of almost everything from metro routes to city streets. Can you do me favor? I'm looking for accommodation near Bundi beach, as it is pretty closed from my workplace and a posh area as well. Could you please tell me the effective ways to look for accommodation and best suburbs to live around Bundi beach.
One more thing, I can't afford much at the moment, so I'm looking for shared accommodation or a granny flat. Because I'm not bringing anything with me, so the house must have a heating and cooling system installed in there.
Hey! I forgot to tell you one thing. I have bought a full year membership of Glenorchy Badminton Club for both of us. It will remind us the precious time that we had in school. Not only this, but I also bought a four-wheel drive truck; we could go on a off-road long drive on holidays.
I can't wait to see you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jay Cutler
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mike, Im so excited to let you know that I am mo...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... us to see each other too often. Mike! as its been 3 months for you to live in th...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...s to city streets. Can you do me favor? Im looking for accommodation near Bundi be...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... around Bundi beach. One more thing, I cant afford much at the moment, so Im lookin...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...g, I cant afford much at the moment, so Im looking for shared accommodation or a g...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...accommodation or a granny flat. Because Im not bringing anything with me, so the h...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... four-wheel drive truck; we could go on a off-road long drive on holidays. I can...
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Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n a off-road long drive on holidays. I cant wait to see you soon. Yours faithfully...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24657534247 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40499296454 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7728884174 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4285714286 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224561766153 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773057700614 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538379147174 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110338237885 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441715495008 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.