Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include:
– Ask where to find a place to live
– Tell them what type of place you’re looking for
– Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there
Dear John,
It's been a long time that I wanted to write you a letter, however, I was excessively busy during the past month. I hope that you are settling in Montreal fine and there are news I wish to share. I too am moving there and I was wondering if you can give me some advice.
The main inquiry for me is regarding the accommodation. The most important factors for me are closeness to city-center and affordability. I would appreciate your inputs and suggestions since I haven't been to Montreal ever.
A simple flat in an apartment would suffice due to the fact that I would rarely be home and more engaged in day-trips and work. Although I would not be home often, it is vital to me that the appliance are new and the flat to be clean and refurbished.
I planned to arrive a week earlier than required so that we can enjoy ourselves for a while before the first work day. I heard that there are wonderful amusements parks and zoos as well as a museum which has an exhibition on contemporary art and sculpture in fusion with Japanese culture and I am very keen to pay a visit there.
hope to hear back from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sina Abrishami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...d there are news I wish to share. I too am moving there and I was wondering if you...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ate your inputs and suggestions since I havent been to Montreal ever. A simple flat...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
... am very keen to pay a visit there. hope to hear back from you soon. Best wis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44186046512 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62267022987 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6905534555 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5833333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178840383235 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591127660967 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440948537709 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886047574895 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578041704626 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.