Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion.
Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter
say which points in the article you agree with
explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers.
offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.
Hi Sir
I am writing this letter to express my views on the report published in The Tribune today composed by you which supports that all city halls are lookalikes in our nation.
Firstly, I really liked your piece of work, but I don't completely comply with the statement that all town centers are similar. I agree, that from architectural point of view, designs are quite same, as this is traditional approach for city halls. As you are aware, these centers are designed to accommodate more people on events of marriage or any other public gathering, hence, large halls are built. Further more, outer look is also looks somewhat similar as generally, white paint is used for white wash.
In addition to these similarities, I would like to throw some light on the variation among them. If you get a visual on them from inside, all are designed on diversity. of the culture of different states of our nation. The paintings, craft, interior, all signifies their respective historical importance and views. Each town hall have their own scenic beauty and they will leave you always a unique imprint on your mind.
If you would like to have a personal view on city hall of my town, I would be really glad to show you around. I have good knowledge on the architecture and history of our town hall, so I can assist you on this tour. I would be looking forward for your positive revert.
Thanks and Regards
Niharika
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71887550201 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49615759298 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3739917266 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9285714286 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23992436058 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071361131976 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535285451394 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140480115727 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150572458279 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.