Write about the following topic:
Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for environment.
What damage does plastic do to the environment?
What can be done by governments and individuals to solve the problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
Nowdays, One of the major reasons for environmental pollution that our planet suffers from is Plastic. The bags, bottles and anything made from plastic is slowly poisoning our environment.It is a non biodegradable resource, which means that it is eternal and will not decompose over a long period of time.
Plastic damages our surrounding environment in a number of different ways, Firstly it will always pollute the land or sea wherever it is being disposed after it's utilization. If it has been dumped on the land it will keep accumulating, as more of it is being thrown in that dumping ground, which results inevitably in a huge pile of plastic. Long exposure to a material like plastic can turn the land into a infertile zone.For example, there is a dumping ground in the city of Delhi which has accumulated a humongous amount of plastic waste and as a result the land has turned barren. Dumping in the sea will in-turn develop into life threatning scenarios for the aquatic organisms. Last year, a Whale was found dead due to ingesting the plastic waste that was being disposed into the sea.Burning it also not a solution as it generates fumes that are toxic in nature and can cause severe health complications to birds or people.
Governments should ban plastic as a forceful measure to prevent further damaging the environment, moreover there should be proper processing plants in place to handle the plastic waste. It can be recycled and circulated into the market, keeping the overall count of plastic being used to a minimum. Individuals should also be aware of the segregation of non-recyclable and recyclable waste. Disposal of a non-biodegradable garbage such as plastic should be done in a responsible manner. Paper bags or any other material can be used instead of plastic. In India, in major cities it has been made mandatory to keep separate bins for both kind of waste materials and are disposed accordingly.
In conclusion, It is not only a responsibility of the government to take preventive measures against damages to environment due to the negative affects of plastic, but also the duty of an individual to take appropriate measures. It is a collective responsibility of everyone as a native beings of Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...tic is slowly poisoning our environment.It is a non biodegradable resource, which ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...rnal and will not decompose over a long period of time. Plastic damages our surrounding envir...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ial like plastic can turn the land into a infertile zone.For example, there is a ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...can turn the land into a infertile zone.For example, there is a dumping ground in t...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Burning
...te that was being disposed into the sea.Burning it also not a solution as it generates ...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a responsible manner" with adverb for "responsible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... garbage such as plastic should be done in a responsible manner. Paper bags or any other material can b...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
... responsibility of everyone as a native beings of Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01455314544 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.360914506 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331506137797 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11792028412 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582342945729 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193036819701 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433076982216 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.