Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.
In your letter, you should tell:
– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased
– what you will do if it is increased.
Dear Mr.Johnson,
I am writing to you in response to your letter regarding the rental increment. I have a few concerns and let me explain them.
I have stayed in this house for the past seven years and been a good tenant paying you the rent sharply before the due dates. Moreover, I take good care of sanitation, clean and good repair of the rental unit.
As per the council of housing, based on the housing measures and locality, the rent which I am paying now is exclusively high. In such a case, increasing the rent will be intolerable and it will be against the tenant law.
Furthermore, if you demand high rent I don't have any option rather than vacating the house. Because, the house as only one bedroom, a kitchen and it was far away from the city centre. For such a place the money you demanding was too pricey.
Being a generous person, I hope you would understand the concerns and practical possibilities in it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Valli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Johnson
Dear Mr.Johnson, I am writing to you in response to ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ew concerns and let me explain them. I have stayed in this house for the past ...
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Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... Furthermore, if you demand high rent I dont have any option rather than vacating th...
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Line 16, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you. Regards, Valli
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64971751412 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53124999384 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2841303527 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282754493218 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829882055448 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696579986309 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127622548529 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550492167252 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.