Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing in connection with your public disclaimer about closing sport center in Sunnyvale, Santa Barbara county. It is quiet heartening to say local council is not able to see the positive atmosphere this sport center creates among the county people.
This sport center is situated at the heart of the town and well connected with public or private transport. People spend their beautiful morning in adjoining garden with practicing Yoga and Meditation. I am used to go there with my friends every morning for some volleyball practice and some quality leisure time with family in evening. Moreover, This center served as the best coaching center to lots of kids in surrounding counties which didn't have sport facilities at that time.
Importance of this sport center is immense among the elders. As they are not frequent travelers they use this center as a meeting point with others and spend some quality time. Council is planning to demolish whole facility and construct a mega shopping mall instead of it is not fruitful for society.
Hoping for your favorable response in this matter. If council wants me and my friends can visit them for further discussiion on this matter as a representatives from community.
Yours faithfully
James Sutherland
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to going', 'used to gonna'.
Suggestion: used to going; used to gonna
...th practicing Yoga and Meditation. I am used to go there with my friends every morning for...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s of kids in surrounding counties which didnt have sport facilities at that time. ...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a representative' or simply 'representatives'?
Suggestion: a representative; representatives
...r further discussiion on this matter as a representatives from community. Yours faithfully ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17224880383 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63334434042 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5515080161 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0833333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265851322512 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991473528154 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523181926894 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157239145432 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630360833419 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.