Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding your advertisement about the award which will be given to that person who makes more efforts for their surrounding environment.
My name is Raman. I am the residence of ramamandi at Jalandhar. Here, I would like to recommend Mr. Kulwinder Kumar who is a member of our panchayat. before him, our area had to suffer a lot of problems such as no facility of water drainage and sweeper. as well as, there was poor water supply system. but, when he becomes in our area, he put many contributions to make it for living place. first, he stops to build the new industries to nearest the living land and river. secondly, he is not only educating the children to even educate the other people who are not aware of their rights. along with it, he also provides free tuition for needy and under the poverty children.
Moreover, I want to give a suggestion about the award that will be suitable for him. So, you will have to give him the humanity award due to his contribution and struggles. because his efforts will be the best examples for the society and our present and future population. As well as, it encourage many other people to save the environment.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Mr. Raman Sharma
- Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your lettersuggest someone you think should receive the awarddescribe what the person does to help the communitysuggest an award 84
- In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company Some people think this isn t justified Do you agree or disagree 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Because
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Suggestion: encourages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69603524229 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57336603199 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647577092511 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5786289211 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.625 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138244827085 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388288963216 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454123964636 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873190975482 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596205671136 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.