Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the offer of an award for people who have been involved in helping needy and poor individuals. It will be conducted by your newspaper next week followed by an annoucement on next program. I would like to recommend and nominate a social worker, Sushil Kumar, who has been helping people for quite a long time. I believe that he should be presented with a reward for his hard work and good deeds.
Being a kind and responsible person towards society, Sushil has helped many poor people by providing them better job opportunities. Apart from this, he voluteerly educates poor children on weekends, so that they can get a better life style in future. He is a great public speaker who has been fighting for gender equality for a while. Moreover, he is always supported by public all over the country for his tremendous work which he had done for the community.
I would like to suggest you to consider his name for the award distribution program on behalf of me and my society members. This would motivate him for doing this amazing social work. I believe the award of 'responsible man of the community' would be perfect for him. Moreover, it would be great if you can publish an article about his achievements in the area of improving poverty
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to the offer of an award for people who ha...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...o that they can get a better life style in future. He is a great public speaker who has b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72384937238 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59352131859 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7587246771 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8461538462 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270112904312 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941286305177 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707075825873 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157361926858 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935007565829 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.