Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information
as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that
some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include
any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many of us think that authorities can share basic details related to technological investigation, trade and the education system with outside world. However, others feel, only trivial data can be shared openly. In my opinion, basic information connected to some particular areas can be distributed among civic bodies but, the key facts must not be disclosed. In this essay, I will give further examples and reasons.
First of all, where data has not much significance to particular technology research, business, and education system might be published, because it is not containing any confidential information. Information about a study carried out on an animal, for instance, facts of outcome can be circulated, but they must keep examination procedures confidential, if we outflow the procedure of investigation among common public then they might try it on humans.
Some amount of people argue that the private documents should not be leaked, because it has vital facts linked to the specific technological research, business deals, and schooling. The announcements related to a nuclear plant setup, government could tell about the start date of the nuclear plant setup, but keep the site hidden and secured, if they disclose the site details, there is possibility of terrorist attack. Additionally, if, anyone leaks critical information then folks can copy research ideas leads to huge financial loss.
Many reasons are responsible to reserve the information secret. Some factual data has user’s personal info, which is not supposed to leak to outsiders, if, it is available freely, it can break the code of ethics of any company. Similarly, user’s data which is not important, can be available to society.
In conclusion, the investigation authorities should not disclose important facts due to criticality and keep it confidential, because statistics which has less significance can be shared by governing bodies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...n system might be published, because it is not containing any confidential information. Informati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, similarly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50836120401 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08624442375 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595317725753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4362691895 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157713363096 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567816907929 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034747655833 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843195806502 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281600622574 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.