Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:
suggest someone who deserves the reward
mention what they have done to help the community
say what reward you would like to give this person
Write about 150 words. You do not need to write addresses.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regards with the newspaper ‘’Weekly news’’ where I read about awarding someone who has done some goods for the community.
I am actually quite keen to recommend you, one person who would definitely deserve a premium for her hard work, she is Mary Brown.
Mary has contributed to organising different local events for our community to bring the neighbourhood together. These events started about a year ago. She is very good at organising and the majority of people are attending to take part. Thankfully to Mary, people gather together and it gives us the opportunity to see what kind of people are living in our neighbourhood. Also, it gives us a chance to make friends. In fact, people get time to chat about the problems and how to make our community better. These events have helped a lot to get closer with neighbours as well as keep our area safe.
I think she would deserve either a certain amount of money or a gift card, in this case, she can decide by herself what she needs.
Yours faithfully,
Danielle Freeman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aper ''Weekly news'' where I read about awarding someone who ...
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Suggestion:
...m for her hard work, she is Mary Brown. Mary has contributed to organising diffe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... what she needs. Yours faithfully, Danielle Freeman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, well, i think, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95187165775 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87500676064 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3501734363 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184912267495 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549646719793 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035853113694 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883826411531 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137435561365 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.