Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say
– What is the topic of presentation?
– What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic?
– What are your requirements for conducting this presentation?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my upcoming presentation topic. My topic is How to communicate with your customers. Let me explain why I have chosen this. It will be every useful for all our staff. First of all, a perfect way to connect with customer always for fronts your company and can thrive your sales. Moreover, effective communication always evolves reputation and increase believes in your product.
Here, I have also a suggestion that you must send a notice to all the staff that, they would have join this presentation without any excuse. I would be grateful if you arrange a spacious hall with projector and sound vocal instrument like mike. One more thing, I need during the session, please serve some refreshment for all the staff like coffee, tea and snacks.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Thank you,
Yours sincerely,
Rajni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Rajni
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you, Yours sincerely, Rajni
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 588.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 113.0 206.0 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20353982301 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7166556121 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.805309734513 0.622605031667 129% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9986061017 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5555555556 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26954522185 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102217780864 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640898194404 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137835642517 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790936631303 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.