Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher.
Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say:
What is your motivation to learn a new language?
How can the teacher help you?
When will you be ready to start?
Dear Mr. Hopkins,
I got your contact details from my teacher, Mr. Abel from the University of Aldora and I am writing to you regarding the Spanish tuition classes that you offer to non-native English speakers. I am hoping that you would accept me as a student.
Last year, I applied for a visit visa to Chile, and I am glad to inform you that I have recently been granted my visa after waiting for 6 long months. As a well-travelled person, who has facile command of Spanish Language, I hope that you can assist me in learning this beautiful language. My mentor told me that you might be willing to deliver a crash course in the Spanish Language to me so that I will be well equipped to hold conversations in Spanish before I embark on my South American adventure.
Since my flight leaves on the 25th August 2018, I was hoping you could start tutoring me as soon as practically possible.
I await your kind response.
yours sincerely,
Laura Kain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
.... I await your kind response. yours sincerely, Laura Kain
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66860465116 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63353482581 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9840431012 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254265830529 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106270552147 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506018522006 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138928702047 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731690853815 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.