You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, It has stopped working. You spoke to the company representative a week ago, but it has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company, In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain the situation
Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about a mobile phone, Which I have bought from an Apple store recently.
In 10th November 2019, I have purchased a brand new I Phone X from an Apple store located in Prabhadevi, I have paid an amount of 80,000 through my credit card and I have received a bill for the same with 1 year warranty on it. My bill number is 786110 in the name of Kutub UDAIPURWALA, However I regret to inform you that after a few days of purchase my device has malfunctioned.
Let me explain it to you in detail. Although when I bought the mobile it was working fine, Suddenly within 1 week the battery of the phone started draining quickly. No matter how much I charged, the battery would run out within few hours of usage.
I have registered a complaint for the same to your executive on your company’s workshop and he assured me he would have it repaired and sent it back to me within 2 days. But unfortunately I have not received any response from him since 1 week.
I request you to kindly look into this and either get the mobile repaired or exchange it with a new one.
Hope you will consider me request and do the needful.
Your’s Faithfully,
Kutub Udaipurwala.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56108597285 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69149765372 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606334841629 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6132303551 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6363636364 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229941501252 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808398809608 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252473385281 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101059818181 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229455042059 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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