Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat Write a letter to your neighbors In your letterExplain the reasons for the noise ApologizeDescribe what action you will take

Dear Sarah,

I have just read the letter about neighbor complaints that you had given to me last Saturday. I am shying for encountering such a problem with my lovely neighbors that I think they have borne me for more than two years.

As you had mentioned, my dog “Nut” scratches ceramic wit her paws repeatedly and I never have noticed that her scratching is unbearable for downstairs neighbors and as you know I have to work every day and my workplace is far from my home and I get home late. Therefore, by mixing some nutritions with blender, an unavoidable noise produces and my washing machine makes noise at midnight too. However, I have to keep my work uniform tidy and clean, that is the reason for working washing machine every night.

If you mind, please forgive me and I apologize to all of my kind neighbors because of these unwilling annoys.

I have decided to cover floor of my home with rugs and carpets to avoid producing noise by Nut and my blender and washing machine will be turned off because a friend has decided to do such works for me.

I’m sorry for causing these problems.

Sheyda

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry for causing these problems. Sheyda
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, i think, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.665 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47979333816 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2276393281 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183015053716 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864469467473 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355036571509 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996079264825 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470376762668 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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