Tourism industry is a significant and valuable way in helping economy booms. Countries that don’t have enough natural resources for exporting and even for keeping their economy alive, find tourism industry very helpful in order to increase their benefits. Regardless of economic aspects of tourism, in my opinion, mutual respects between hosts and visitors is necessary and it is a way understanding customs and cultures of other countries.
When a country advocate fundamental infrastructures for tourism industry, it is obvious that visitor groups from all over the world would be able to choose this country as a destination for their trips without limitations and restrictions. By entering international visitors, the local people become familiar with their cultures. For example, they kind of food they choose, their languages, their clothing and their preferences. Furthermore, international tourists can easily know about the climate patterns of areas, foods, hand crafts, urban and rural structures of the destination, customs, people clothing and trends. By restricting visitors, informational, cultural, behavioral and many others exchanges will be restricted.
Tourists and hosts should respect themselves and should try to learn from each others rather than judging. It is very obvious that, sometimes, there are huge amount of differences among cultures. However, both of them should manage the condition. Therefore, it becomes very easy for everyone to avoid some misunderstandings from some cultures, because, by restricting and forcing people, they ignore some cultures and behaviors and try to mimic other cultures. Therefore they may be afraid of judging in other countries and hide the reality.
All in all, regardless of any culture, people should live freely without any sense of judgment. They should share their customs, way of livings, interests, hobbies, festivals, and many other local cultures with each others to help having a life full with peace and without worries about vicissitudes of future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...obvious that, sometimes, there are huge amount of differences among cultures. However,...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...aviors and try to mimic other cultures. Therefore they may be afraid of judging in other ...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to have' or 'have'.
Suggestion: to have; have
...local cultures with each others to help having a life full with peace and without worr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64285714286 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92795224831 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1837925765 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261513424704 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832547254073 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574152906977 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153240544487 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610879584096 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.