Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologise•describe what action you will take

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take

Dear Sir ∕ Miss,
I am writing this letter to you to inform you that I have received your complain and I apologies about the disturbance that I have caused you.
I would like to explain to you the cause of this noise. We have just found out that there are some leakages in the house water circuit which requires some repairs to take place. It is required to demolish certain areas in walls and floor of the house, in order to change the worn water tubes. The deal which planed with the plumper in charge of the repair is that, noisy work should last for another two days after words, No noise will be heard while completing the work. Please accept my appreciation for your understanding of the situation. Accordingly, my promise to finish within promised schedule. There are some actions I will take regarding to the working period that may result in shorten it, in addition to keeping the demolishing work to take place only during day times.

Yours Sincerely,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to take place only during day times. Yours Sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, may, regarding, so, while, in addition, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64534883721 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38416757018 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7762283981 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282435061029 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11017098028 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103871058648 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248342749784 0.12726935374 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783257371756 0.0580467560999 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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