Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
I hope you are doing well, the purpose of writing this note to you is regarding your dog that stay too noisy around the night that I could not sleep.
As you know , I am a student of Engineering. Its my last semester and to gain substantial marks I need to make a project that needs to be shown in final examination. I am working deliberately on this project, and it take several hours of day. Being tired I need the rest and peace at night, but your dog is too noisy that its near to impossible to take even a nap. The sound hurt my ears and bring headache for which I took pills later. I is important for me to get good sleep because its impacting my project work now, I am making mistakes and on top of that not able to concentrate on my work.I think the dog is going through some health issue, probably you should visit the vet soon.
I hope for some optimistic action from your side.
Your Faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t that I could not sleep. As you know , I am a student of Engineering. Its my l...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...u know , I am a student of Engineering. Its my last semester and to gain substantia...
^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...ng deliberately on this project, and it take several hours of day. Being tired I ne...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t take several hours of day. Being tired I need the rest and peace at night, but ...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am'?
Suggestion: am
...eadache for which I took pills later. I is important for me to get good sleep beca...
^^
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ortant for me to get good sleep because its impacting my project work now, I am mak...
^^^
Line 5, column 597, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...that not able to concentrate on my work.I think the dog is going through some hea...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...bably you should visit the vet soon. I hope for some optimistic action from yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, well, i think, you know, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24861878453 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34648838236 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0673196182 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269807464643 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10140770108 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103709078087 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155135907929 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124227454565 0.0580467560999 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.